Someday
You will be loved
But
What if
That day has come
And gone?
Reblogged this on Nature’s Abhorred Vacuum.
Wow – that hits right to the solar plexus – simple, perfect and powerful!!! 🙂
Nice! I love your line breaks, which give the reader time to think about what the words means instead of rushing through the poem.
Thanks! I like playing with line breaks more than punctuation marks.
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LITTLE TALKS 
Reblogged this on Nature’s Abhorred Vacuum.
Wow – that hits right to the solar plexus – simple, perfect and powerful!!! 🙂
Nice! I love your line breaks, which give the reader time to think about what the words means instead of rushing through the poem.
Thanks! I like playing with line breaks more than punctuation marks.