Bodies

Mine forms a love letter

Folded beneath the sheets

Yours forms the envelope

4 comments

  1. Short but powerful piece. Nice use of metaphor.

  2. Nadia

    This is precisely the reason why simplicty is powerful. As is silence. (Infact I believe simplicity stems from silence).

    Portraying depth through so few words is eloquence. With this you grasp the reader with both hands – It’s a firm hold, (but one which I long not to remove myself from) it removes all thought and I focus only on these words – I picture it, I see it, I feel it.

    (And I can only imagine how amazing it must be to become a part of what you have described here).

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