Mine forms a love letter

Folded beneath the sheets

Yours forms the envelope


  1. Short but powerful piece. Nice use of metaphor.

  2. Nadia

    This is precisely the reason why simplicty is powerful. As is silence. (Infact I believe simplicity stems from silence).

    Portraying depth through so few words is eloquence. With this you grasp the reader with both hands – It’s a firm hold, (but one which I long not to remove myself from) it removes all thought and I focus only on these words – I picture it, I see it, I feel it.

    (And I can only imagine how amazing it must be to become a part of what you have described here).

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